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PostPosted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 5:27 pm    Post subject: "Children of Dorsaeg" Reply with quote

More great fiction! What else need I say?

"Children of Dorsaeg"
by Nyki Blatchley

    In a corner of Europe that history has forgotten, Charlemagne and his Franks are crushing the last "heretic" Arian kingdom. With the help of ancient magic, two young enemies realize that they have more in common than they believed. Perhaps there is hope for the future, after all.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 11:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good job! I like the historical aspect and the action was well described.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 12:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'll say 'good story' as well, Nyki. Left me with a lot of questions as to who the shepherd was, what role will the king play in the future, and the fate of Offa and Pepin - but leaving the reader with something to ponder isn't a bad thing. Keep writing!
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